Plagiarism+essay+(week+4)

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====** Plagiarism essay According to the** 1995 //Random House Compact Unabridged Dictionary plagiarism is :// "use or close imitation of the language and thoughts of another author and the representation of them as one's own original work", this term may not sound as bad as it is, because when we __plagariz__e someone is a trick , a __deceit__ to ourselves and to everybody , and that __its__**** is ****not the worst thing of all , the worst thing of plagiarism is that its just another way to steal someone, it could not be his cellphone or his car but we are stealing that person there for plagiarism should be considered as a crime.====

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Also when we plagiarize someone and steal that person, we are stealing one of the most precious things a person can have , such as his ideas , opinions , mental work , etc.******** this ****** could be part of the paragraph before because ** ** it deals with the same topic. **

Plagiarism is also __an horrible__ action, __its__ only use** d ** by cowards or person** people ** who __dont__ ** do not use contractions when **** writing **** formally **believe capable __to do__ ** of doing **something better , __persons__** people ** who ** would **usually rather hide behind someone else** ' **s ideas or thoughts for not having one of __there__ ** their **own and also __persons__ who ** would **choose the easy way and expect to win credit for someone elses job and efforts.

__In the actually__ ,** At the moment, ** here in Venezuela while we grow** comma ** many of our friends cheat__s__ in the tests at school or just presents a job in which they have nothing __to do in it__ ** confusing **, and that is just wrong because they are not hurting anyone but themselves, they are making achievements with someone else** ' **s efforts and winning some credit without doing __nothing__.** anything **

I believe that is one thing we should change in Venezuela if we really want to make a progress because we can not have people who __is__** are **making achievements without doing __nothing__** comma ** studying without learning, etc, and one of the factors that i__nflues__ in this behaviors is the plagiarism , the way in which that action is seen and the little punishment __a persons__ who plagiarize receive.

__And__ we can see plagiarism not only in school, but also in jobs , universi__ty__ ** ies **, __etc__** too informal **. It´s a crime people usually don´t use ** usually ** to see so wrong, people just see plagiarism wrong when they think someone __steal a millionare idea__ , program (Windows) , book (like Harry Potter, Twilight,etc), etc and therefore they see the consecuences of plagiarism , but those persons who argue that the mayor scale plagiarism is wrong (who in this case arealmost everybody) , the why when we see a little plagiarism don´t do nothing?, __t__here are people who does but the mayority don´t do nothing and even in some cases we try to help that person or fell symphaty for him , but it should not be like that because it´s just exactly as we were helping a person to rob a bank , i__ts__ wrong , __its__ a crime and if we help him or dont tell anyone about that we are being accomplice to that crime , so if the next time a person is plagiarize someone and we __dont__ do nothing we are beign accomplices of him and reforzing the way of think that a crime could be good.
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